Footprints in the valley


How green is my valley??
Is it really green or just a farce?
Shall I believe or shall I leave it in the alley!!!
I followed the footprints and discovered its all wrong..


Shall I leave it or shall I keep walking??
And find a new destination?
All around I see is question marks and no full stops..
So I guess, will have to put a comma and move on....


Will create new traces and design a new map...
Anyways whats the fun in exploring the explored,
When you have options of inventions and discoveries.

Comments

  1. nice indeed a very positive winning ,xpolring attitude of this lovely poetry

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  2. Hey!

    A good one..dilemma.. drama..brainstorming.. a lot emotions into it ...

    not on a serious note : "Lady with heels thought that she would leave less of carbon footprint:P"

    Cheers!

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    1. hahahaha :) Lady didn't know anything :P thanks dear :)

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    2. it went into semantics and voyage and memories so much in it :)

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  3. Yeah and thats you! Smart, bold and reflective!

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  4. Beautiful thoughts. And its reality... its not as green as it is imagined...

    Thanks

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  5. So what we have here!!
    oh my a lil Adventurer wrapped in the cages of society
    Break free with the arms of creative expression

    For we have thee. . . the muddled Utopian!!

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    1. lovely u have written another poetry in comment :)

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